Thursday, August 19, 2004

How I Failed To Win Her Back

(she said)
those big
fat
blotches
on your letter,
it's good
that boys
can cry

(I said)
they're not tears
they’re
7-Up

(she said)
I see...
Good-
bye

6 comments:

emil said...

hello. i was just blog hopping.. and i happened to find ur blog.. yup.. :) i like your poetry. :)

Boomsa Happy said...

very nice. and sad. good to have you back and writing.

michael said...

I hate it when you click on people's names and it says "Profile Not Available" don't you?

Boomsa Happy said...

some of us now have profiles that are available. :)

hazel said...

Ahah! So there you are!

Syl said...

Wonderful! So simply put... but a world of moments envisioned. The next time I drink a Seven-Up, I won't know whether to laugh or cry.