Monday, July 04, 2005
Old Flatfish
A piano sat in the corner
I must have transported it
The hundred odd miles from the South
To the Midlands
But, no, that bundle of images
Is not there any more
Probably being recycled as we speak
It may turn up
And why am I writing this?
A memory sparked by a melody?
Is that why I’m writing this?
For warm glows and the sad regrets?
I’m not sure.
I was staying above a shop.
What did it sell?
Decorating stuff, paint, wallpaper.
I think.
What can I remember?
One wall was banana yellow.
The bed was a mattress on the floor.
My guitar, of course.
My stereo – as we called record players then.
And the piano in the corner.
I wrote a song
With descending notes.
Lower and lower.
Down to depths hidden.
I liked the words
But never knew what they meant.
Never imagined I’d be turning them over in my head
In the next millennium, more than thirty years
In the future
Listen to the death of old flatfish
My oh my
He has a long way to float
Listen to the death of old flatfish
My oh my
Old flatfish flies by boat
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"I liked the words
But never knew what they meant.
Never imagined I’d be turning them over in my head
In the next millennium, more than thirty years
In the future"
that part got me.
and there you go again, punting me with excellent imagery. this is what i love about your poetry, roger. you see everything with new eyes. and describe them in fresh, new ways. thanks.
"Kippers for tea- oh baby kippers for tea,
Bye bye baby goodbye!"
It reminds me of something long forgotten.
Not sure what?
I still think fondly of my old box record player it had a sound like no other and you could change records by jumping on the floor, a lovely poem
Anyone in a band named after a great Buddy Guy song is a-ok by me! :D
Very tactile and sensual poem. I also like its rhythms.
Michael, isn't the second line -
Goodbye whitebait, now fry?
poetic souls do think alike, aren't they? and this proves i don't have one. i wasn't able to grasp it. :(
You could be right Roger.
Other fishy songs-
Theres a plaice for us.
Cod only knows
Salmon chanted evening
Eel meet again
Do you like sole music?
Prawn to be wild
etc. etc.
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