Teacher said,
Leave out the the,
two too's one too too many
and and after the comma
should go after the any.
The the, the too -
and move the and
and that should make it flow.
Not that that, that that's fine -
but this that, that could go.
I said,
The the, the too, the and -
I would agree with you.
But I'm very fond of that -
this that and that that too.
Which that is that?
Is that this that?
Asked teacher with a grin.
Okay - but take that last in out
And leave that last out in.
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This is one of my poems from A Million Brilliant Poems (part one) (see link opposite) I'm hoping the series will run that long but it probably won't.
Lovely! Proud to be in the book, Roger. It's a good'n and I wish it all success.
Nice one one!
I JUST LOVE THIS ONE!!!!
(sorry for shouting)
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