Thursday, May 19, 2011

Thanks a Bunch

I wondered, worried, on the train
About my debts and how to pay my bills
When all at once, as the train slowed down
I saw a bank
Of lovely daffodils

4 comments:

Roger Stevens said...

Have tried various versions of this. Does this one work do you think?

Justin said...

How about ending with the footnote, so I jumped off the train and picked them and now a fiver each to you sir.... or something like that. I do like it though.

Russell 'C.J.' Duffy said...

Leave it as it is as the word play of money and bank works well.

wastedpapiers said...

How much are words worth? Simply spiffing!